Monday, 5 January 2015

Exemplar Essay Plan A2 Edexcel G&P Unit 4C

Exemplar Star Essay Plan of the Month

Essay Question: 7 Has the Supreme Court become an ‘imperial judiciary’?
(Total for Question 7 = 45 marks)

Essay Jigsawing ©

Introduction – Plan
Arthur Schlesinger first coined the phrase “imperial” in accosiation to the president. What he meant was that the president had over stepped his constitutional boundaries and was undermining the checks and balances on him. In essence ruling unchallenged. An argument can be made that Supreme court is displaying the signs of an imperial judiciary. Since what ever they rule can be final. Nevertheless an equally valid argument can be put forward that the supreme court is not imperial and in many regards can be seen imperilled since they are have no enforcement power and their decisions can be reversed by constitutional amendment. Furthermore the rise of judicial restraint retracts from the argument that the supreme court is indeed imperial.

Main Body
Choose a paragraph to write in full and then evaluate paragraph
Many political commentators have accused the supreme court of exercising too much power. The increased willingness of justices to strike down federal legislation adds weigh to the argument that the supreme court is indeed imperial.  Which essentially means they have power and say over a variety of policies. The supreme court challenging the congress legislation in Citizen United vs  FEC  further emphasises how active the court has become.  The court has strayed away from its original intention, in which Founding fathers such as Jefferson intended the court to practice restraint.  However on the contrary it can be equally argued that the supreme court only strikes down legislation when necessary. Furthermore justices, Scalia and Roberts are proponents of Judicial restraint and intend that the Court stays within its constitutional bounds since it is unelected and should leave the legislation duties to the Elected Bodies. However on balance it is more convincing to say that the supreme court is indeed imperial since whenever it strikes down legislation it is very difficult to overturn their say. It requires a constitutional amendment and in practicality is very difficult to cast an amendment.  The court indeed operates on a level higher then the elected bodies since it essentially has the last say on any legislation. To challenge the courts decision is nearly impossible.
Write a Plan
·       It is indeed imperial gave it self powers like judicial review which was not explicitly stated in the constitution
·       Counter can be impeached and have been before
·       Re-counter haven’t been impeached since 1803 so really a useless power

Evaluate a second paragraph
Not imperial because the president appoints them  and in service to him
Since they hold duty for life they owe no one anything they don’t appeal to voters and to the other bodies
Though too much criticism has resulted in supreme court individuals stepping down like Harriet Miers stepped down before even becoming a judge – they are there to server in the interest of the people and so if the people are against them they leave their post.
Choose two paragraphs - Then evaluate each paragraph

Conclusion write in full   - In conclusion it can be assessed that the conservative fear of a too imperial supreme court is justified. With the rise of the Supreme Court having the last say in social causes such as Brown vs Topeka and the fact the supreme court has over stepped its constitutional bounds by granting itself new powers such as judicial review. Whilst it can be asserted that they are still able to be checked upon by the legislative branch – the lack of impeachment highlights how this check has not been exhausted usefully and therefore it is more compelling to suggest that the supreme court is indeed imperial.
Really well written essay clearly focused on the remit of the question and good embedding of the Mark scheme throughout.  Clearly argued, supported with evidence, evaluated and linked back to the question, clearly this is topic you are very passionate about.  I would suggest you write this essay out in full and use this template to apply to your other essays to improve their calibre.  A pleasure to read and will be shared as an exemplar of good practice with my other students.  Well done.

Mark Scheme

Factors which suggest that the Supreme Court has become an imperial judiciary include:
• judicial review means that the constitution means what the court says it means
• almost no area of public policy is immune to constitutional challenge
• the increased willingness of justices to strike down state and federal legislation
means that they have become arbiters over a wide range of policy, most famously
desegregation and abortion
• many conservatives would argue that some of the rights which the court has
established in recent years have only a tenuous basis in the constitution
• once appointed justices have security of tenure and may vote on the court in ways at
odds with the impression they created during their confirmation hearings
Factors which suggest that it has not include:
• its lack of enforcement power
• the court’s decisions may be reversed by constitutional amendment
• it has no power of initiation and must wait for cases to be brought to it
• the reluctance of the court to become involved in some areas, such as foreign policy
• the need for justices to give at least some regard to public opinion and the political
context if the legitimacy of the court is to be maintained – perhaps such
considerations influenced Justice Roberts in the Sebelius decision.
• many liberals would argue that the court must intervene to strike down legislation
sometimes if basic rights are to be maintained
• Congress has the power to impeach justices and vary the size of the court – the
threat of the latter was sufficient to prompt the court to change course in 1937
A threshold Level 2 response will typically exhibit the following features:
• Outline awareness of the meaning of the term ‘imperial judiciary’
• Limited knowledge of at least one way in which it might or might not apply to the
Supreme Court
A threshold Level 3 response will typically exhibit the following features:
• Clear understanding of the meaning of the term ‘imperial judiciary’
• Clear explanation of at least one least one way in which it might and one way in which it

might not apply to the Supreme Court.

The mumpreneur project: 2 Revision Tips 1

The mumpreneur project: 2 Revision Tips 1: 1.      Change up the nature of your essay plans so that you have experience of writing and planning as many different types of essays as ...

2 Revision Tips 1

1.     Change up the nature of your essay plans so that you have experience of writing and planning as many different types of essays as possible.  Also use the mark scheme to plan, write and assess your revision and essay skills.
d.     If you written an essay and didn’t get the mark you wanted, again in pairs you could assess each essay focusing on what you can use from the mark scheme to improve your essay.   
a.     Write normal essay plans

b.     Additionally you might find it useful to use Essay jigsawing ©  - Practice writing essay plans with introductions and conclusions only and bullet pointed middle paragraphs with 1 or 2 paragraphs evaluated

c.      If you are revising in a group you could write an Essay puzzle © where you write an introduction, different people write each of the main paragraphs and a different person writes the conclusion. 

d.     Then evaluate each person’s section, improve, photocopy and distribute it out to each person to use for revision.

      2.  Again if revising in pairs or groups, then you might find it useful to come to a joint revision session together and peer assess each other’s work using the mark schemes.

a.     In pairs you might also find it useful to do half an essay each and come together and finish each other’s essays.

b.     If a friend has written a good essay, then you can use it as a revision tool to create an essay plan and they could do the same with yours.

c.      If it is a different topic you could even use it as a template.



Friday, 2 January 2015

The mumpreneur project: 4 Mock Exam Tips 5

The mumpreneur project: 4 Mock Exam Tips 5: 1.       Create a stairway of significance as a revision tool to assess the main themes of significance that you will need to assess in you...

4 Mock Exam Tips 5

1.      Create a stairway of significance as a revision tool to assess the main themes of significance that you will need to assess in your different essay plans for each topic. (see example below) 

Why did GB go to War?

Balance of Power


The commitment to the balance of power had been GB’s aim since 1856, additionally she did not want to see the equilibrium upset by the grandiose ambitions of one nation in 1815 it had been France (Congress of Vienna) and by 1912 it had become Germany.

Although there had been a lull in proceedings, nevertheless Germany were still determined to tip the balance in favour of Germany especially as they had aligned themselves with Austria-Hungary.  Therefore the Balkan security was increasingly becoming an issue. 
For instance. Serbia emerged as a new country in 1912, tipping the balance away from a German block towards a Slavic dominance of the region.
German naval rivalries/threat 


GB and German tensions increase because of Weltpolitik.  Berlin-Constantinople railway also heightened this.  Naval rivalry was more important than colonial and economic rivalry because German sought to undermine Britain’s capacity to maintain her trade links and her security to her empire.

The balance of power within the arms race was tantamount to war
Nevertheless if GB truly went to war because of naval rivalry, then they would have gone to war in 1908, when the tensions were at their peak.  Furthermore, then tensions had subsided by 1914 and where not so high.
Therefore an important reason Britain went to war in 1914 was the German naval threat and the rivalry this caused from Germany seeking to undermine Britain’s capacity to maintain trade links. However, it was not the central cause as if it was they would have gone to war in 1908 when naval tensions were at their peak.
Entente

Since GB had been in splendid isolationism, she thought it would be best to form attachments with her neighbours.
France – in 1904 the Entente Cordiale agreement was signed.  By 1912 GB and France had entered into a naval agreement.
However, this is not a comprehensive explanation for GB go to war.  Moreover, there are many underlying factors that have significance, such as GB’s commitment to the balance of power.  For GB.  Moreover, the political divisions within the liberal party and Britain’s domestic problems could also be evaluated to be more significant in the reason for GB going to war than their commitment to the Entente.
Nevertheless, it could be suggested that if GB did not support France after their previous military discussion her moral worth would have been challenged and she would have been left isolated in Europe, if Germany should win.  Thus she was compelled to go to war, regardless of Belgian.




2.      Create a PEEL table (as below and use it with your essay plan to ensure you are outlining and assessing the question as best as possible.
Point made (P)
Point explained (E)
Point evidence (E)
Point Evaluate & Link (EL)
The Brown-Peterson study used a lab experiment so it is low in external validity.
This means that it is difficult to generalise the findings to real-life …..
….. because we don’t usually get asked to remember trigrams while counting backwards, so we don’t know if this accurately measures our real STM.
Therefore, the Brown-Peterson study demonstrates that whilst it offers us insight, it lacks applicability to the real world.

3.      Write as many essay plans for the previous exam questions as you can and then when you have finished all the past papers.  Begin to start writing your own questions and creating plans for those, it is likely they will phrase a question in a new and unusual way and you want to be prepared for any question they could ask.

Outline and assess the functionalist contribution to crime and deviance (50)
Evaluate and critically assess the view that crime and deviance is both inevitable and normal (50) made up question
Intro: What is functionalism? Value Consensus, biological anatomy etc. They see crime as functional however many social theories disagree I.e. Marxism. 

Literally work your way down the theorists and concepts.
P1: Durkheim critique with Marxism
P2: Merton’s Strain Theory Critique with New Criminology
P3: Albert Cohen evaluate with Left realism
P4: Cloward and Ohlin evaluate with Feminism
+ Many more

Conclusion:
There valid in this sense: blah blah blah
There not good in this sense: blah blah blah

For the top grades you need to evaluate a point as soon as you explain it. So rather than having a chunky evaluation at the end, you criticize your own point as soon as you write it. Really abuse those evaluative words, "However", "On the other hand", "Per Contra"... try and spell it out to the examiner. Don't worry about the AO3 marks, if you did an essay in the structure I just gave you then you will be fine.


4.      It is important when revision to create an evaluation grid which you can use generically and specifically with the topic which highlights the strengths and weakness of the topic under discussion.

Evaluation grid of the House of Commons


Strengths
Weaknesses
Representation



Calling government to account



Scrutiny



Legislating



Deliberation



Checking government power

The commons retains the power to veto legislation and this represents a discipline upon governments
Party loyalty and discipline means than many MPs are reluctant to challenge the government.  The government rarely loses a major vote in the Commons.
Overall analysis
Therefore in overall evaluation of the effectiveness of MPS in relations to the functions of Parliament, clearly MPs Parliament has significant strengths in relation to calling the government to account, the use of scrutiny, legislating and via deliberation.  Especially because MPs can effectively question ministers on the floor of the House.  Additionally, some independent-minded, campaigning MPs can work effectively on behalf of pressure groups and political campaigns.  Nevertheless, Whips can enforce strict party discipline on all key debates and votes.  Finally MPs have little time reserved in Parliament for backbench business.  Therefore, whilst Parliament can be an effective check on government power nevertheless…. (make your own judgement)


Thursday, 1 January 2015

The mumpreneur project: 4 Mock Exam Tips 4

The mumpreneur project: 4 Mock Exam Tips 4:        1.      Familiarise yourself with the mark scheme and use it to support your revision and create essay plans, essay maps...

4 Mock Exam Tips 4

      




1.     Familiarise yourself with the mark scheme and use it to support your revision and create essay plans, essay maps or essay tables or self-assess your answers. 


2.Create essay plans, essay mapping plans, essay jigsaws and answers for your various topics, e.g. Stalin’s economic policies ... (this will be tackled further in another session).

 3.   Continue practicing past exam papers in timed conditions without your notes until the day before (not night before the exam). Timed practice is a necessity to keeping you feeling confident and secure in your exam. You know it all, you just need to show the examiner this.



       4.    For questions that take a different slant on a topic you have already completed a practice question for, use your practice answer to create a detailed and essay intensive plan for the alternative approach/perspective.